Damn, dude.
That was awesome! The movement was somewhat choppy, but I'd let that slide, heh. The graphics were cool, the steam was a cool effect and I loved the way you made the environment change during Don's ownage over the thugs. I'm into hearing some voice acting rather than reading all the dialogue, but that's just me. I don't mind the reading, but voice acting is something that I feel would make the series better.
Overall, the submission was pretty sweet, and I'm looking forward to future episodes. Keep it up!